After receiving the feedback from my class mates about my first draft of 'Genetics', I reviewed the comments in order to establish which parts were weaker and needed changing. Overall I was really happy with the feedback I received, initially when developing this idea I was worried that the crosscutting between the old and new footage would confuse the audience and the link of the home-videos being of the adult males when they were younger would not be understood, however my audience did manage to make the connections and what the meaning I was trying to covert to them was established so I was pleased with that. I mostly recieved one the boarder level 4 mark and I hope that with a few of these changes I shall be able to gain a level 4 from my work. The first change that I made which a few had commented on was not being able to hear the dialogue clearly over the music, I therefore decreased the volume of the music and increased the volume of the dialogue (a very quick but I hope effective change). Also when watching my film, I noticed that I had spelt one of the title sequences wrong however I had decided to change my titles as I was not 100% happy with them, so this issue could be easily overcome.
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